Presentation of my position paper

Since I have submitted my position paper, today is the day that I have to present my paper to the whole class. Since my thesis statement is ‘Edna’s rebellious act is a form of self discoveries ‘so I just presented what are Edna’s rebellious acts that eventually lead her to discover new things that appeals to her. By the end of class, Miss Baiti has announced our marks for position paper. I just got 13 marks and i am quite dissapointed with it. Maybe my discussions on the issues are not very strong. :)